Monday, 7 September 2015

steep oaken hillsides...
a sunburst elicits green
from the river's black

2 comments:

Frank... said...

Hi Matthew, nice observation.I don't think I've ever seen the word "elicits" in a haiku before; however it works well...

Matthew Paul said...

Thanks very much, Frank. I suspect you're right - it's not a very haikuesque word - but I'm glad you think it works.