Wednesday, 6 May 2009

pocking the flintwork
of the ruined priory:
a murder of crows


jem said...

Great first line - that repeated k sound so strong. And the whole is so visual.

Alan Summers said...

I agree with jem.

It's a wonderful wonderful opening line!

You have a deft and tight hold on lines that bring out multi-senses.

all my best,

The With Words Competition 2009.