pocking the flintwork
of the ruined priory:
a murder of crows
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My book of haiku, The Regulars, is reviewed by Michael Dylan Welch in Modern Haiku.
Wing Beats featured in the best books round-up of 2008 in The Guardian.
2 comments:
Great first line - that repeated k sound so strong. And the whole is so visual.
I agree with jem.
It's a wonderful wonderful opening line!
You have a deft and tight hold on lines that bring out multi-senses.
all my best,
Alan
The With Words Competition 2009.
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