Sunday, 17 May 2009

over the rumbles
of a cornering tram
the swoop of terns


Frank Williams said...

A very visual haiku Matthew. I love the last line...

Alan Summers said...

Gorgeously "sound hinting" as well as visual.

all my best,
With Words Online Haiku Competition.

jem said...

I feel transported (no pun intended) by this. I see neither trams or terns in my daily life. I feel like I've been given a glimpse of somewhere new.